Format chapter three

chapters/chap03-recap-home.rst

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 Dwarf whatnow?
 ##############
 
-In this tutorial we’ll set up some more living space for our dwarfs as
+In this tutorial we’ll set up some more living space for our dwarves as
 well as more workshops and stockpiles. This will just be a short one as
 I’m going to give you some tasks to do on your own at the end. Are you
 up to the challenge?! Lets do it!
@@ -19,40 +19,37 @@ Dwarf Fortress. Lets look at what we’ve learned:
 * How to get some basic resource production and gathering going.
 
 One thing we haven’t covered is saving your game! Perhaps an
-oversight?! Simply hit “escape” and then select “Save Game”. But don’t
+oversight?! Simply hit :kbd:`Esc` and then select :guilabel:`Save Game`.
-do it now! “Save Game” assumes you want to exit and it will take you
+But don’t do it now! :guilabel:`Save Game` assumes you want to exit
-back to the main menu. Don’t, for the love of [insert deity here]
+and it will take you back to the main menu. Whatever you do, **don't**
-choose “Abandon the Fortress”, it kills it!
+choose :guilabel:`Abandon the Fortress` - that ends the game!
 
-One thing I should note about saves is that, for me, it never, ever
+I should note that saves can get confusing - if you start to play with
-seems to put the save in any logically named folder. When you come back
+a seasonal autsave, then save that, the names get longer and don't
-to DF and hit “Continue Game” choosing the last save in the list won’t
+always sort in a useful way.  When you come back
-necessarily result in your most recent game starting. Instead, you may
+to DF and hit :guilabel:`Continue Game`” choosing the last save in the list
-have to look in your DF \data\save folder and see which folder has the
+won’t necessarily result in your most recent game starting. Instead, you may
-most recently modified files. Then you might, as I do, rename the older
+have to look in your ``<DF>/data/save/`` folder and see which folder has the
-folders.
+most recently modified files. Then you might rename or delete the older folders.
 
-Worse, if you chose the wrong save you can’t seem to easily exit DF.
+If you choose the wrong save, there are two options:  you can save as
-You can save, and then exit, or hit “Abandon the Fortress” from the
+usual and return to the main menu, or force-close DF with the DFHack
-menu. Clearly neither are ideal so I usually use task manager to kill
+command ``die``.  Enter it in the ingame console (:kbd:`Ctrl`-:kbd:`P`),
-dwarfort.exe.
+but be careful - this will quit without saving or checking again!
-
-I know, it’s really bloody annoying and I don’t know how to fix the
-save issue. Man up and deal with it!
 
 Good luck! And lets continue…
 
 Making our Hole our Home
 ========================
 Lets look at making this place a little more comfortable for our
-dwarfs. First up, they really need a nice place to eat. Just picking at
+dwarves. First up, they really need a nice place to eat. Just picking at
-food on the floor isn’t much fun, dwarfs want a beautiful hall in which
+food on the floor isn’t much fun, dwarves want a beautiful hall in which
 they can quaff beer and eat cat biscuits (yes, you can make biscuits
 out of cats. Ugggh). Lets help them set one up.
 
 For now we’re going to set it up near our newly-dug space. I’m also
 going to make a bunch of 2 by 2 rooms, which will serve as permanent
-bedrooms for our dwarfs. There's no such thing as a perfect design, so
+bedrooms for our dwarves. There's no such thing as a perfect design, so
 lets just get the function right and worry about the perfect layout in
 your next fortress.
 
@@ -70,9 +67,12 @@ couple of tables and chairs.
 
 Now you need to go and place a bed in each room, a door on each
 doorway, and tables and chairs in the dining room-t0-be. You should
-know how to do all of this using “b” “Build” and “d” for “door”, “t”
+know how to do all of this using :kbd:`b` for :guilabel:`Build`, then
-for “table” and “c” for “chair”. If you forget the shortcuts just look
+:kbd:`d` for :guilabel:`Door`, :kbd:`t` for :guilabel:`Table`, and
-at the “b”, “build” menu and scroll through it using the usual method.
+:kbd:`c` for :guilabel:`Chair`... which in a Mason's workshop is
+called a :guilabel:`Throne`.  Yep, the same object can have different
+names depending on the material - another reason using the shortcuts
+can be easier than scrolling.
 
 Here are my rooms partly completed. If you look closely you can see a
 slacker dwarf having a nap.
@@ -105,56 +105,63 @@ valuables for yours. They are important, and handy, but we’ll discuss
 them later some time.
 
 Oh, you may get various windows pop up from the visiting trade liaison.
-Just space back out of them for now.
+Just :kbd:`Esc` back out of them for now.
 
 Back to the eating place thing!
 ===============================
 By now you should have the dining room furniture set up, so it’s time
-to let the dwarfs know it’s the official dining room of the fortress.
+to let the dwarves know it’s the official dining room of the fortress.
 We do that in much the same way we set up bedrooms:
 
-* Hit “q” and move the cursor over any one of the tables (and for good
+* Hit :kbd:`q` and move the cursor over any one of the tables (and for good
   fun, move it over a chair and and read what sort of rooms chairs set up).
-* When over a table, hit “r”, and again you should see a flashing blue
+* When over a table, hit :kbd:`r`, and again you should see a flashing blue
   box which doesn’t quite fill the room.
-* Use “alt”+”down arrow” to expand the room to fill the dining room
+* Use :kbd:`-` to expand the room to fill the dining room space.
-  space.
+* Hit :kbd:`Enter`.
-* Hit “enter”.
+* Now hit :kbd:`h` to turn the dining room into a meeting hall as well.
-* Now hit “h” to turn the dining room into a meeting hall as well.
+  The :guilabel:`(N)` on the menu will become a :guilabel:`(Y)`.
-  You’ll see the (N) gets turned into a (Y) on the menu.
+* :kbd:`Esc` back out to resume the game. All tables and chairs in the
-* “Space” back out to resume the game. All tables and chairs and the
   entire space will now be used.
 
 Well done! A dining room and meeting hall is now set up! Without a
-meeting space immigrant dwarfs get confused and don’t know where to go
+meeting space immigrant dwarves get confused and don’t know where to go
 when they arrive, milling about at the edge of the map. A meeting space
 seems to send out invisible mind-control rays and any newly-arrived
-dwarfs will immediately home in on it and into your fortress. Handy!
+dwarves will immediately home in on it and into your fortress. Handy!
 
 For amusement, go back up stairs and find the wagon we arrived with. I
-bet you it has a few dwarfs hanging around it. Know why? Because by
+bet you it has a few dwarves hanging around it. Know why? Because by
 default your wagon is your first meeting area!
 
+If you press :kbd:`F1`, the map will move to the wagon - because it's
+also your first hotkey location.  The :kbd:`H` hotkeys menu allows
+you to scroll through the hotkeys, name each of them, and set one
+to zoom to your current location - which saves time once you spread
+out vertically.  Try setting :kbd:`F2` to zoom to our big underground
+rooms now.
+
 But the wagon is outside and a long way from the fort and we’d much
-prefer our dwarfs to be safe and sound within our walls. We should
+prefer our dwarves to be safe and sound within our walls. We should
 probably remove that temptation to stand outside and get killed by
 carp, elephants, monkeys, unicorns, skeletal whales, zombies, giant
-eagles, deer, goblins, etc, so lets remove the wagon. Hit “q” and move
+eagles, deer, goblins, etc, so lets remove the wagon. Hit :kbd:`q` and move
-the X over to the wagon, then hit “x” and the wagon will be “slated for
+the X over to the wagon, then hit :kbd:`x` and the wagon will be
-removal”. This should free up a few logs (which the wagon is made up)
+:guilabel:`Slated for removal`. This should free up a three logs
-and will prompt any lazy, slacker dwarfs to head back inside!
+(which the wagon is made up)
+and will prompt any lazy, slacker dwarves to head back inside!
 
 Everyone gets their own room!
 =============================
-Dwarfs love to have their own room, much preferring it to sharing a
+Dwarves love to have their own room, much preferring it to sharing a
-barracks (which they will do  by default otherwise), and conveniently
+dormitory (which they will do  by default otherwise), and conveniently
 we have set up a number of little rooms. Lets declare that they're
 bedrooms, so our dwarves will come and claim one:
 
-* Go to your empty bedrooms, hit “q”.
+* Go to your empty bedrooms, hit :kbd:`q`.
 * Chose a bedroom, moving the X over a bed until it’s flashing.
-* Hit “r”. The blue selection area probably fills the room.
+* Hit :kbd:`r`. The blue selection area probably fills the room.
-* Hit “enter”.
+* Hit :kbd:`Enter`.
 
 You can assign the bedroom to a specific dwarf, but unless you want to
 play favorites there's no need - if a dwarf wants a nap and doesn't
@@ -165,7 +172,7 @@ happens, the bedroom status will now look something like this:
    :align: center
 
 If you get confused about a bedroom (or any room’s status), just hit
-“q” again and move around over each object. Of interest is the fact
+:kbd:`q` again and move around over each object. Of interest is the fact
 that you can assign one room to have multiple uses, for example, put a
 bed and table in the same room and specify that the room is both a
 bedroom and a dining room, but doing so reduces the overall quality of
@@ -180,24 +187,23 @@ Workshop fun!
 Lets set up more workshops. First, put another mason workshop in with
 the other mason shop. It will be handy in the long run, I am sure. Set
 up a couple of carpenter’s workshops in the room next door. While
-you’re at it, set-up a big wood pile (“p”, “w”). The next thing to do
+you’re at it, set-up a big wood pile (:kbd:`p`, :kbd:`w`). The next thing to do
 is to set up some more  piles. How about we go through and make a
-“Finished Goods” pile? Build it using “p” and then “g”. Lets continue
+:guilabel:`Finished Goods` pile? Build it using :kbd:`p`, :kbd:`g`.
-chucking piles up in those rooms. A few squares for cloth (“h”),
+Lets keep making stockpiles in those rooms. A few squares for cloth (:kbd:`h`),
-leather, (“l”), and bars/blocks (“b”) makes sense. Where one pile
+leather, (:kbd:`l`), and bars/blocks (:kbd:`b`) makes sense. Where one pile
-starts and another stops gets confusing with all that stone around, but
+starts and another stops can get confusing, but give it your best shot.
-give it your best shot.
 
-Finally, lets also add a Craftsdwarf’s Workshop to our room. Use “b”,
+Finally, lets also add a Craftsdwarf’s Workshop to our room. Use
-“w” and then “r”, chose the goods and place the workshop. These are
+:kbd:`b`, :kbd:`w`, :kbd:`r`, chose the materials and place the workshop.
-particularly handy and profitable workshops, but more on them later!
+These are particularly handy and profitable workshops, but more on them later!
 
 This is how mine looks:
 
 .. image:: images/dftutorial47.png
    :align: center
 
-That’s all for now, except before I go I have some **homework** for
+That’s all for now, except before I go I have some homework for
 you. But don’t worry, this is the fun kinda homework. See if you can
 complete these tasks before we meet again:
 
@@ -206,19 +212,19 @@ complete these tasks before we meet again:
    changed to autumn by now you’ll notice all the trees a pretty gold
    colour. Admire them before you saw them down.
 #. Designate a bunch of plants to be harvested.
-#. Make a lot more beer and a lot more barrels
+#. Make a lot more beer and a lot more barrels, or set up ``workflow`` for
+   some of the furniture you'll need later (beds, doors, tables, chairs).
 #. Make some “bins” in the carpenters shop. About 15 or so should do.
    You’ll have to scroll to find them in the carpenter “a” “Add new task”
    list. (or go “a” then “n”). Bins are what everything that isn’t food or
    booze are stored in.
 #. Go to the mason’s workshop and set it to build blocks on repeat
-   (“q”, then “a” then “b” then “r”). Do this only if you’ve already
+   (:kbd:`q`, :kbd:`a`, :kbd:`b`, :kbd:`r`). Do this only if you’ve already
    managed to make a LOT of bins or your Bar/Block pile will get filled
    quickly!
 #. See if you can make some stone crafts. You will find them under the
-   “rock” sub-menu from the “add task” menu on the craftsdwarf’s workshop.
+   :kbd:`g` :guilabel:`rock` sub-menu from the :guilabel:`Add new task`
-   You better make sure you have lots of wood bins for your crafts to go
+   menu on the craftsdwarf’s workshop. Make sure you have lots of bins for
-   in though, and a big “Finished goods” stockpile too!
+   your crafts to go in though, and a big finished goods stockpile too!
 
 Good luck! And see you soon!
-