From 96e13deac63f87de0ed64843ac0e1cd2d37fa6a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Griatch Date: Mon, 28 Aug 2023 18:54:51 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Fix typo in tutorial world doc --- .../Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md | 20 ++++++------------- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md index 2b48422e55..e77ca5cd49 100644 --- a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md +++ b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md @@ -8,17 +8,13 @@ To install the tutorial world, stand in the Limbo room and input: batchcommand tutorial_world.build -This command runn the build script in -[evennia/contrib/tutorials/tutorial_world/build.ev](github:evennia/contrib/tutorials/tutorial_world/build.ev). -Basically, this script is a list of build-commands executed in sequence by the `batchcommand` command. -Wait for the building to complete and don't run it twice. +This command runs the build script in [evennia/contrib/tutorials/tutorial_world/build.ev](github:evennia/contrib/tutorials/tutorial_world/build.ev). +Basically, this script is a list of build-commands executed in sequence by the `batchcommand` command. Wait for the building to complete and don't run it twice. -> After having run the batchcommand, the `intro` command becomes available in Limbo. Try it out for -> in-game help using an example of [EvMenu](../../../Components/EvMenu.md), Evennia's in-built +> After having run the batchcommand, the `intro` command becomes available in Limbo. Try it out for in-game help using an example of [EvMenu](../../../Components/EvMenu.md), Evennia's in-built > menu generation system! -The tutorial world consists of a single-player quest and has some 20 rooms to explore as you seek -to discover the whereabouts of a mythical weapon. +The tutorial world consists of a single-player quest and has some 20 rooms to explore as you seek to discover the whereabouts of a mythical weapon. A new exit should have appeared named _Tutorial_. Enter the tutorial world by typing `tutorial`. @@ -33,13 +29,9 @@ Only LOSERS and QUITTERS use the `give up` command. ![the castle off the moor](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/22916c25-6299-453d-a221-446ec839f567/da2pmzu-46d63c6d-9cdc-41dd-87d6-1106db5a5e1a.jpg/v1/fill/w_600,h_849,q_75,strp/the_castle_off_the_moor_by_griatch_art_da2pmzu-fullview.jpg?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOiIsImlzcyI6InVybjphcHA6Iiwib2JqIjpbW3siaGVpZ2h0IjoiPD04NDkiLCJwYXRoIjoiXC9mXC8yMjkxNmMyNS02Mjk5LTQ1M2QtYTIyMS00NDZlYzgzOWY1NjdcL2RhMnBtenUtNDZkNjNjNmQtOWNkYy00MWRkLTg3ZDYtMTEwNmRiNWE1ZTFhLmpwZyIsIndpZHRoIjoiPD02MDAifV1dLCJhdWQiOlsidXJuOnNlcnZpY2U6aW1hZ2Uub3BlcmF0aW9ucyJdfQ.omuS3D1RmFiZCy9OSXiIita-HxVGrBok3_7asq0rflw) (image by Griatch) -*To get into the mood of our miniature quest, imagine you are an adventurer out to find fame and -fortune. You have heard rumours of an old castle ruin by the coast. In its depths, a warrior princess -was buried together with her powerful magical weapon — a valuable prize, if true. Of course, -this is a chance for adventure that you simply cannot turn down!* +*To get into the mood of our miniature quest, imagine you are an adventurer out to find fame and fortune. You have heard rumours of an old castle ruin by the coast. In its depths, a warrior princess was buried together with her powerful magical weapon — a valuable prize, if true. Of course, this is a chance for adventure that you simply cannot turn down!* -*You reach the ocean in the midst of a raging thunderstorm. With wind and rain screaming in your -face, you stand where the moor meets the sea along a high, rocky coast...* +*You reach the ocean in the midst of a raging thunderstorm. With wind and rain screaming in your face, you stand where the moor meets the sea along a high, rocky coast...* ---