From 4e95fb9b3afae0f846c3098e3edcf4640b496cf9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: iLPdev Date: Sun, 20 Aug 2023 19:11:55 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] docs(tutorial-beginner): :memo: revise tutorial installation text copy --- .../Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md | 21 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md index 5dabc2a23a..c4b78e3632 100644 --- a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md +++ b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Tutorial-World.md @@ -1,29 +1,28 @@ # The Tutorial World -The *Tutorial World* is a small and functioning MUD-style game world shipped with Evennia. -It's a small showcase of what is possible. It can also be useful for those who have an easier +The *Tutorial World* is a small, functioning MUD-style game world shipped with Evennia. +It's a small showcase of what is possible. It may also be useful for those who have an easier time learning by deconstructing existing code. -Stand in the Limbo room and install it with +To install the tutorial world, stand in the Limbo room and input: batchcommand tutorial_world.build -What this does is to run the build script +This command runn the build script in [evennia/contrib/tutorials/tutorial_world/build.ev](github:evennia/contrib/tutorials/tutorial_world/build.ev). -This is pretty much just a list of build-commands executed in sequence by the `batchcommand` command. +Basically, this script is a list of build-commands executed in sequence by the `batchcommand` command. Wait for the building to complete and don't run it twice. -> After having run the batchcommand, the `intro` command also becomes available in Limbo. Try it out to -> for in-game help and to get an example of [EvMenu](../../../Components/EvMenu.md), Evennia's in-built +> After having run the batchcommand, the `intro` command becomes available in Limbo. Try it out for +> in-game help using an example of [EvMenu](../../../Components/EvMenu.md), Evennia's in-built > menu generation system! -The game consists of a single-player quest and has some 20 rooms that you can explore as you seek +The tutorial world consists of a single-player quest and has some 20 rooms to explore as you seek to discover the whereabouts of a mythical weapon. -A new exit should have appeared named _Tutorial_. Enter by writing `tutorial`. +A new exit should have appeared named _Tutorial_. Enter the tutorial world by typing `tutorial`. -You will automatically `quell` when you enter (and `unquell` when you leave), so you can play the way it was intended. -Both if you are triumphant or if you use the `give up` command you will eventually end up back in Limbo. +You will automatically `quell` when you enter (and `unquell` when you leave), so you can play the way it was intended. Whether you are triumphant or use the `give up` command, you will eventually end up back in Limbo. ```{important} Only LOSERS and QUITTERS use the `give up` command.