From 70c890b21e86d960b44eb3913279cf3a8fe6f8ea Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: iLPdev Date: Wed, 19 Jul 2023 05:25:04 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 1/3] docs(beginner-tutorial): :memo: improve overview.md * format sidebar for consistence * edit text copy for syntax, grammar, economy of word, and clarity --- .../Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md | 26 +++++++++---------- 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md index b508589ce7..74258fb35c 100644 --- a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md +++ b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md @@ -1,25 +1,23 @@ # Part 2: What we want ```{sidebar} Beginner Tutorial Parts -- [Introduction](../Beginner-Tutorial-Overview.md) +- [Introduction](./Beginner-Tutorial-Overview.md)
Getting set up. -- Part 1: [What we have](../Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Part1-Overview.md) +- Part 1: [What We Have](Part1/Beginner-Tutorial-Part1-Overview.md)
A tour of Evennia and how to use the tools, including an introduction to Python. -- **Part 2: [What we want](./Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md)** -
Planning our tutorial game and what to think about when planning your own in the future. -- Part 3: [How we get there](../Part3/Beginner-Tutorial-Part3-Overview.md) -
Getting down to the meat of extending Evennia to make our game -- Part 4: [Using what we created](../Part4/Beginner-Tutorial-Part4-Overview.md) -
Building a tech-demo and world content to go with our code -- Part 5: [Showing the world](../Part5/Beginner-Tutorial-Part5-Overview.md) -
Taking our new game online and let players try it out +- *Part 2: [What We Want](Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md)* +
Planning our tutorial game and what to consider when planning your own. +- Part 3: [How We Get There](Part3/Beginner-Tutorial-Part3-Overview.md) +
Getting down to the meat of extending Evennia to make your game. +- Part 4: [Using What We Created](Part4/Beginner-Tutorial-Part4-Overview.md) +
Building a tech-demo and world content to go with our code. +- Part 5: [Showing the World](Part5/Beginner-Tutorial-Part5-Overview.md) +
Taking our new game online and letting players try it out. ``` -In Part two of the Evennia Beginner Tutorial we'll take a step back and plan out the kind of tutorial game we want to make. This is a more 'theoretical' part where we won't do any hands-on -programming. +In Part Two of the Evennia Beginner Tutorial, we'll take a step back to plan the type of tutorial game that you will create. This part id more 'theoretical' in that you won't do any hands-on programming. -In the process we'll go through the common questions of "where to start" -and "what to think about" when creating a multiplayer online text game. +In the process, we'll address the common questions of "where to start" and "what to think about" when creating a multiplayer online text game. ## Lessons From 0ead0d5b5bd11b25e5a0358137973ef2b3fce167 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: iLPdev Date: Wed, 19 Jul 2023 05:28:58 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 2/3] docs(beginner-tutorial): :memo: update part 2 overview heading --- .../Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md index 74258fb35c..916215d189 100644 --- a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md +++ b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -# Part 2: What we want +# Part 2: What We Want ```{sidebar} Beginner Tutorial Parts - [Introduction](./Beginner-Tutorial-Overview.md) From 00f9f5f699fab931edffed50e971fa844e272463 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: iLPdev Date: Sun, 23 Jul 2023 15:12:50 -0700 Subject: [PATCH 3/3] docs(beginner-tutorial): revert to `we`-tone and typo --- .../Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md index 916215d189..65de992520 100644 --- a/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md +++ b/docs/source/Howtos/Beginner-Tutorial/Part2/Beginner-Tutorial-Part2-Overview.md @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
Taking our new game online and letting players try it out. ``` -In Part Two of the Evennia Beginner Tutorial, we'll take a step back to plan the type of tutorial game that you will create. This part id more 'theoretical' in that you won't do any hands-on programming. +In Part Two of the Evennia Beginner Tutorial, we'll take a step back to plan the type of tutorial game that you will create. This part is more 'theoretical' in that we won't do any hands-on programming. In the process, we'll address the common questions of "where to start" and "what to think about" when creating a multiplayer online text game.