Format chapter 7

chapters/chap07-nobles.rst

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ having lost his mum! No, nothing of the sort! Baby Dwarf Fortress
 managers like yourself will prosper and grow strong like a seedling,
 going on to bear nice dwarven fruit. And not the Class-C sort of fruit
 that gets picked and sold on the streets, no, nice, rare, delicious
-fruit! Anyway, where was I? Oh, yes, tutorial 9, Nobles and other
+fruit! Anyway, where was I? Oh, yes, chapter 7, Nobles and other
 layabouts. Get on with it!
 
 Interior decorating
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ details.
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    :align: center
 
-Nobles (from the “n” menu) generally want a bedroom (assigned from a
+Nobles (from the :kbd:`n` menu) generally want a bedroom (assigned from a
 bed), a dining room (assigned from a table), an office (assigned from a
 chair) and often a tomb as well (assigned from a coffin). For
 simplicty’s sake, set up each room in its own contained area and then
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ favourite animal in them), that sort of thing. Usually nobles want at
 least two of most of those items so produce a ton and get placing!
 
 What is all this about nobles I hear you ask? Well, once your fortress
-gets to a certain size, those purple slacker dwarfs will come to live
+gets to a certain size, those purple slacker dwarves will come to live
 in your fortress. They usually don’t do much (other than haul stuff)
 but they do make demands. Their biggest demand is for rooms, which need
 to be of a certain quality. Quality can be increased through smoothing
@@ -46,9 +46,9 @@ or a ban on the export of certain goods. It pays to try and meet the
 demands of your nobles or they may go crazy and cause all kinds of
 problems.
 
-Lets have a look at nobles. Go ahead and hit “n”. This is your noble
+Lets have a look at nobles. Go ahead and hit :kbd:`n`. This is your noble
 list, right now it should be very short, but in time it will grow.
-Chances are it looks like this (click for big):
+Chances are it looks like this:
 
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    :align: center
@@ -56,9 +56,9 @@ Chances are it looks like this (click for big):
 With a newby fortress only one dwarf is set as expedition leader. As
 the fortress grows more noble ranks will appear in this list and more
 positions will be filled. Lets look at the current expedition leader.
-Hit “enter” and you’ll see info about the current leader. Our dwarf
+Hit :kbd:`Enter` and you’ll see info about the current leader. Our dwarf
-owns 14 objects (mostly clothes and stuff), has “meagre quarters”. Lets
+owns 14 objects (mostly clothes and stuff), has :guilabel:`meagre quarters`.
-assign Eshtan Urdimfash a full set of noble rooms, just for kicks. He’s
+Assign Eshtan Urdimfash a full set of noble rooms, just for kicks. He’s
 not demanding any, but we’ll do it for practice. If he were demanding
 more rooms you would see them in red on the left. If he had a room, but
 not a good enough room, it would show what he’s currently got and what
@@ -66,13 +66,13 @@ he’s actually demanding.
 
 Once you’ve assigned the bedroom, office, dining room and tomb, if you
 go back to the noble list and view our chap you will now see his
-holdings have changed (clicky biggy):
+holdings have changed
 
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    :align: center
 
 Next job for you is to assign a book keeper. Usually, if you embark
-with at least one dwarf with the “appraiser” skill (good idea, by the
+with at least one dwarf with the :guilabel:`appraiser` skill (good idea, by the
 way), this job would already be filled. But for now it’s vacant. This
 skill is what makes our stock count accurate (more on that later).
 Fortunately for us we can chose a dwarf to do the job. They might not
@@ -80,14 +80,14 @@ be doing a good job at first (having no skill), but they will learn,
 and they provide a useful function, accurate stocktaking!
 
 So, in the nobles screen use the arrow keys to scroll down to
-“Bookkeeper” and hit “enter”. Find Eshtan and hit enter, assigning him
+:guilabel:`Bookkeeper` and hit :kbd:`Enter`. Find Eshtan and hit :kbd:`Enter`,
-to this job. The bookkeeper requires an office to work, just as well we
+assigning him to this job. The bookkeeper requires an office to work,
-just assigned him one, right?
+just as well we just assigned him one, right?
 
-Next, with Bookkeeper still highlighted hit “s” for “settings” (the
+Next, with Bookkeeper still highlighted hit :kbd:`s` for :guilabel:`settings`
-only noble role you can assign settings for). The screen you’ll see now
+(the only noble role you can assign settings for). The screen you’ll see now
 dictates how much time your dwarf will spend counting. Use the arrow to
-scroll to “Highest” and hit enter. Eshtan will now work very hard to
+scroll to :guilabel:`Highest` and hit enter. Eshtan will now work very hard to
 get all our stock counts accurate!
 
 There you go, a quick overview of nobles. As you play the game more you
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ you get confused.
 Accounting is fun! Really!
 ==========================
 We’ve mentioned stocks, but not discussed the stock screen yet, so lets
-get to it now. Hit “z” and you’ll see this screen:
+get to it now. Hit :kbd:`z` and you’ll see this screen:
 
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    :align: center
@@ -106,7 +106,8 @@ get to it now. Hit “z” and you’ll see this screen:
 Lets go over what you’re seeing here:
 
 * Across the top are sub menu options. You can scroll through them
-  using the arrow keys (left and right) and then hit enter to learn more.
+  using the arrow keys (:kbd:`←` and :kbd:`→`) and then hit :kbd:`Enter`
+  to learn more.
 * There’s a description of your wealth on the left. We don’t know yet
   as we need a noble with skillz.
 * There are food store stats, but those question marks indicate we
@@ -114,10 +115,11 @@ Lets go over what you’re seeing here:
   bookkeeper should turn these figures accurate fairly soon.
 * Then we have population information. Not too interesting I find.
 
-With “Animals” selected, hit enter. You can see all the animals in the
+With :guilabel:`Animals` selected, hit enter. You can see all the animals in
-fortress on the following screen. This is also the screen you can set
+your fortress on the following screen. This is also the screen you can set
 animals to be butchered on mass. If you set a few to be butchered a
-dwarf with “small animal dissection” and “butchery” skills enabled will
+dwarf with :guilabel:`small animal dissection` and :guilabel:`butchery`
+skills enabled will
 run off and start grabbing those animals and chopping them up in the
 Butchery. You won’t need to set anything at that workshop, the butcher
 tasks gets added automatically.
@@ -133,35 +135,35 @@ Also, make sure you leave at least one breeding pair (male and female
 symbols to the right of the pet’s name), or you won’t get any more baby
 animals popping out, will you?
 
-Now go back to the stocks menu and hit “Kitchen”. This is where you see
+Now go back to the stocks menu and hit :guilabel:`Kitchen`. This is where
-a list of what your dwarfs will consider using to cook meals in the
+you see a list of what your dwarves will consider using to cook meals in the
-kitchen when ordered (dwarfs like cooked meals). Remembering that
+kitchen when ordered (dwarves like cooked meals). Remembering that
 cooking destroys plant seeds, here are some guidelines for you:
 
-* Cooking meat (ie, “cook” is blue) is fine.
+* Cooking meat (ie, :guilabel:`cook` is blue) is fine.
-* Don’t cook spawn or seeds (“cook” is red”) unless you have way, way
+* Don’t cook spawn or seeds (:guilabel:`cook` is red`) unless you have way, way
   too many.
 * All plants can be brewed as brewing returns seeds.
-* Turn off cook for “Plump Helmet”, you don’t want to cook them out of
+* Turn off cook for :guilabel:`Plump Helmet`, you don’t want to
-  stock, right?
+  cook them out of stock, right?
 * Cooking booze is great as you end up magically creating more food
   than you started with. Trust me on this (or look it up on the wiki).
 
 Good work! Now back out of that menu and chose stone. In the stone menu
-you see (in red) all the stones your dwarfs are forbidden to build
+you see (in red) all the stones your dwarves are forbidden to build
 with/use and in green, all the ones they are allowed to use. Scroll
 through with the arrows and hit enter over every stone that does not
 have a use description appear on the right. The only exception may be
 bauxite due to its special magma-proof qualities.
 
-The reason you are doing this is so that the dwarfs have much more
+The reason you are doing this is so that the dwarves have much more
 choice in the stone they will use to make doors, walls, etc etc. This
 stops them running half way across the map to get some boring stone
 when a perfectly useful stone (that just happens to be yellow) is
 sitting next to them, but ignored.
 
-Backing out to “z” the final menu is “stocks”. This is a master list of
+Backing out to :kbd:`z` the final menu is :guilabel:`stocks`. This is a master
-all items in your fortress and is a good way to see exactly how much of
+list of all items in your fortress and is a good way to see exactly how much of
 certain items you’ve got . Until your bookkeeper gets working you won’t
 get any detail, but trust me, you’ll see heaps, in time.
 
@@ -169,19 +171,19 @@ You can use this menu to manage the items in your fortress more easily.
 For example, you might find, after a goblin raid, that you’ve got a ton
 of their crappy weapons lying around, what to do with them? Well, you
 could add them to weapons traps, or you could find them in the stocks
-menu and hit “m” for “melt” when they are selected and then any smelter
+menu and hit :kbd:`m` for :guilabel:`Melt` when they are selected and
-with the “melt metal object” task on will have a dwarf grab the item
+then any smelter with the :guilabel:`Melt metal object` task on will
-and then melt it back to a metal bar.
+have a dwarf grab the item and then melt it back to a metal bar.
 
-You can also use this menu to “forbid” items. If you have a bunch of
+You can also use this menu to forbid items. If you have a bunch of
-low-quality junk you don’t want your dwarfs to use, hit “f” for
+low-quality junk you don’t want your dwarves to use, hit :kbd:`f` for
-“Forbid” with the item highlighted and you’ll find they will ignore it.
+:guilabel:`Forbid` with the item highlighted and they will ignore it.
 This is handy when setting weapons and armor up for your military as
 you can prevent them from picking up wooden swords and thus push them
 to pick up your non-forbidden steel swords!
 
-The last menu “Justice” doesn’t come in to play until we have more
+The last menu :guilabel:`Justice` doesn’t come in to play until we have more
-nobles who will start wanting to throw dwarfs into jail if they ignore
+nobles who will start wanting to throw dwarves into jail if they ignore
 their mandates. Worry about that latter!
 
 Homework time!
@@ -189,8 +191,8 @@ Homework time!
 You’ve got a tricky job to do now, ok, not so tricky really. I want you
 to dig exploratory tunnels in EVERY DIRECTION from your living room and
 the below levels. Try and cover much of the map with your grid of
-tunnels. We’re looking for three things: 1. Ore, 2. Gems, 3. Magma. You
+tunnels. We’re looking for three things: metal ore, gems, and magma. You
 may want to assign another dwarf or two to mining duty, and to make a
-few more picks as well (at the metalsmith’s forge, under “weapons”).
+few more picks as well (at the metalsmith’s forge, under :guilabel:`weapons`).
-We’ll see what this map is like when we return in Tutorial 10!
+We’ll see what this map is like when we return in chapter 10!